Luna Lovegood
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Post by Luna Lovegood on Sept 3, 2007 18:56:20 GMT
Name/Alias: Cassie
BiC::
Full Name: Cassandra Scamander-Lovegood
Portrayed By:No one in particular
Age//Year: 14, 4th year
House: Ravenclaw
Affiliation: None
Parents: Luna Lovegood, Charles Scamander
Blood: Pure blood
History:Cassandra's mother, Luna Lovegood, and her father, Charles Scamander, are both magi-zoologists, so she's always been surrounded by animals or talk about animals. As a child, she was encouraged by her mother to be creative, and was raised in a good family. Admittedly, her parents weren't the most normal of parents, and would frequently take her to places most parents wouldn't let their children hear of. Both of her parents were rather trusting, and she's never been restricted around boys - nor would she need to be, having still shown no signs of interest in either sex. She might have been spoiled, but if she was, it was intellectually, rather than through money or toys.
Appearance: She has rather scraggly, dirty blonde hair, large silver eyes, and looks a great deal like her mother, though her stature, chin, nose, and low cheekbones comes from her father. She wears the radish earrings her mother gave her to always have her mother with her, and she's picked up the habit of tucking her wand behind her ear from her mother, as well.
Personality: She's very dreamy, and likes the supernatural a lot. She's often found 'daydreaming', though most of the time, she's just attempting astroprojection. Cassandra has a bit of a gift for drawing, though, like her father, she is tone-deaf and sounds like a dying cat whenever she tries. Her style of writing is vaguely... interesting. She mostly keeps to herself, but she;s made a few friends with some Ravenclaws, and the occasional Gryffindor or Hufflepuff. She's a bit easier to get along with than her mother. She doesn't trust the younger children too much.
Other: She is particularly fond of rabbits, and when she does master her patronus, sometime in early 6th year, it is a snow hare.
Picture:http://leen-galeas.deviantart.com/art/luna-lovegood-60688730
Role-playing sample:Cassandra brushed a lock of hair back from her face. She ignored the taunting, rather deciding to focus on her astroprojection. When another hoot came her way, she merely smiled, and blocked them from her mind. Cassandra's silver eyes rolled up wards, and her thoughts went to that new method of astroprojection she'd gotten from that 2nd year Hufflepuff. She really doubted it'd work, but then again, what else could she do? Age wasn't TECHNICALLY a factor in whether someone was right or wrong... but it tended to hurt someone when they were only 12...
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Post by Foster on Sept 3, 2007 19:04:02 GMT
Er, might I suggest you expand slightly more on her? We have a guide somewhere, let me find you the link. www.herbificus.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=rules&action=display&thread=1186089264For ideas on length, why don't you check out the characters already accepted? We're a literate r/ping site, so we do need more than just a paragraph. This is your only chance to tell us all about your character! Once you've expanded, I'm sure it'll be fine. :] I shall leave it on Pending for the time being, instead of moving it to Denied, because it's obvious you can do it. [/center]
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Luna Lovegood
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Post by Luna Lovegood on Sept 3, 2007 19:30:27 GMT
Thanks for that. :3 I just edited it.
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Luna Lovegood
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Post by Luna Lovegood on Sept 3, 2007 19:53:46 GMT
Luna marrying Newt Scamander's grandson is NOT random, I swear! JK stated it on a chat interview.
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Post by Lotte on Sept 3, 2007 20:20:13 GMT
I apologize but here are the changes that I would like you to make.
[x] Your character must have some sort of affiliation. Whether that be: The Order Neutral The Death Eaters
I would suggest that her affiliation be Neutral seeing as both of her parents are... but it is of course your decision.
[x] I am afraid we must go by the canon list and so your characters parents must be: Luna Lovegood and Dean Thomas
[x] For this reason she will no longer be a pureblood. Seeing as Dean was muggle born she will now be a halfblooded witch.
[x] You will also need to change the parts about her parents on her history seeing as they have now been altered.
Also concerning her history... might you extend it a little. I would quite like to here about where she grew up and with whom. How she gets on with each of her parents and things that developed her as a person. Perhaps how she likes either of her siblings and maybe a nice little ancedote from her past.
[x] Her appearance seems very fitting but again it could be a little more padded out. How tall is she? What does she think of her own appearance? Is she very vain? What are her best features?
More like this would be very suitable.
[x] "Cassandra has a bit of a gift for drawing, though, like her father, she is tone-deaf and sounds like a dying cat whenever she tries."
This sentence makes absolutely no sense. Might you alter it?
[x] I like her personality, she is what I would imagine a child of a Luna to be. However, again might you expand a little?
What are her flaws? Strengths and weaknesses? What is it that makes her a Ravenclaw and what does she enjoy about life. Other than being dreamy is she deeper than that?
Again a little more explantion would be lovely.
[x] Finally there is that roleplaying sample. It is, to be frank, too short. I hate to sound rude but this is a literate/advanced rp site and so each of your posts will be required to be the very minimum of 3 paragraphs in length. If you feel that you will be unable to achieve this then I'm afraid that I will not be able to accept your character.
Now then... I hope I haven't sounded too harsh but I just want to do what's best for the site by keeping it as literate as possible. I hope you understand and I look forward to seeing a new, updated version of your character.
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